To me (personally) because the rest of her outfit is also red I don't think " Lady in Red Shawl" because the rest of her outfit is red. The shawl is done well but there is no reason to just focus on the fact that the shawl is red and more significant than the rest of the scene or clothing. If she only had on a red shawl Or it was the only red item in the painting then I would focus on that for a title. So for my count I would go with Lady In The Window, To me the focus is on " what is this lady thinking about as she is looking out the window not "how I am dressed looking out the window:
I like the city scape that she is looking down on and the posture of her body that suggest she could be seeing about anything down on the streets or thinking about any thing. I think it's cool how well you did her reflection in the window on the varanda doors.
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To me (personally) because the rest of her outfit is also red I don't think " Lady in Red Shawl" because the rest of her outfit is red. The shawl is done well but there is no reason to just focus on the fact that the shawl is red and more significant than the rest of the scene or clothing. If she only had on a red shawl Or it was the only red item in the painting then I would focus on that for a title. So for my count I would go with Lady In The Window, To me the focus is on " what is this lady thinking about as she is looking out the window not "how I am dressed looking out the window:
I like the city scape that she is looking down on and the posture of her body that suggest she could be seeing about anything down on the streets or thinking about any thing. I think it's cool how well you did her reflection in the window on the varanda doors.
Lorraine, your paintings are wonderful works of art. The Lady in the Window is simply put - BEAUTIFUL.
So nicely done. What is she thinking? I'm so curious!
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